Self Critique

Well for this revision I made a list of the suggestions made by fellow students and went back and made those. Doing this, I think it did add a little more flavor to this piece. In it I added more emotion to majority of the speech bubbles to keep the audience attention since there isn't any sound; I made the patient cringe during his transformation to add more emotion to a somewhat emotionless character; also going back to add my credits 1 second of black at beginning and end.